<div dir="ltr">+1 Brendan's 'confident' or 'confidence' suggestion.<div><br></div><div>It is a bit of a break in the flow of the document to have the link.</div><div><br></div><div>The reasoning was that since it needed to be included</div>
<div>(else make our own list of examples) then just include it very simply </div><div>and not dwell on it. </div><div><br></div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Wed, May 21, 2014 at 8:20 AM, Brendan Howell <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:brendan+soc@howell-ersatz.com" target="_blank">brendan+soc@howell-ersatz.com</a>></span> wrote:<br>
<blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">This is excellent! Two small things that stood out to me:<br>
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On 05/19/2014 12:05 PM, Femke Snelting wrote:<br>
> In case you think these things do not happen:<br>
> <a href="http://geekfeminism.wikia.com/wiki/Timeline_of_incidents" target="_blank">http://geekfeminism.wikia.com/wiki/Timeline_of_incidents</a><br>
><br>
</div>While this is a great resource, I don't think it belongs in the CoC. It<br>
sounds glib and defensive. A document like this Code does not need to<br>
justify its own existence. Also, it shifts the narrative point of view<br>
from being the group to "you".<br>
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> - For Participants: Feel safe. Participants know that if we experience<br>
> something that we are not comfortable with, our concerns will be taken<br>
> seriously - and that help is available.<br>
> - For Organisers: Feel sure. Organisers know the standard to which the<br>
> LGM community holds itself, and what to do when an issue arises.<br>
</div>I would suggest changing "feel sure" to "confidence". "Sure" sounds<br>
kind of vague to my American ears.<br>
<br>
Thanks for your hard work putting this together!<br>
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-Brendan<br>
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