[Promotion] hello

[Santiago Roza]

On 1/23/06, Patrick Trettenbrein <patrick.trettenbrein at kdemail.net> wrote:


> The main goals of the new marketing group will be:
>
> - promoting the free desktop and its advantages
> - doing market research

the whole thing sounds great, but i'd change this part.  if there are
only two elements in the list, it looks better if you don't list them
that way.

i'd suggest "The main goals of the new marketing group will be
researching the market, and promoting the free desktop and its
advantages".


greetings,


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Santiago Roza
Departamento I+D - Thymbra
santiago.roza at thymbra.com