[muji/master] reword intro paragraph

Dafydd Harries daf at rhydd.org
Tue Jun 2 10:52:16 PDT 2009


---
 xep/mingle.xml |    6 +++---
 1 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/xep/mingle.xml b/xep/mingle.xml
index bbe0494..2e37bec 100644
--- a/xep/mingle.xml
+++ b/xep/mingle.xml
@@ -38,9 +38,9 @@
   </revision>
 </header>
 <section1 topic='Introduction' anchor='intro'>
-Jingle can be used to initiate and negotiate peer to peer media sessions. This
-document shows how to initiate and join multiperson conferences. Mingle
-conferences are held in <cite>XEP-0045</cite> rooms.
+Jingle <cite>XEP-0166</cite> is used to negotiate peer to peer media sessions.
+Mingle is a way to coordinate Jingle sessions between a group of people.
+Mingle conferences are held in <cite>XEP-0045</cite> rooms.
 </section1>
 
 <section1 topic="How it works" anchor="howitworks">
-- 
1.5.6.5




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