[muji/master] reword

[Dafydd Harries]

---
 xep/mingle.xml |   12 ++++++------
 1 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/xep/mingle.xml b/xep/mingle.xml
index b662ae1..2767dc0 100644
--- a/xep/mingle.xml
+++ b/xep/mingle.xml
@@ -44,12 +44,12 @@ Mingle conferences are held in <cite>XEP-0045</cite> rooms.
 </section1>
 
 <section1 topic="How it works" anchor="howitworks">
-Mingle works by having all participants in a conference announce the
-definitions of the content that they provide in their MUC presence. This
-serves two purposes. Firstly, so that each participant knows which contents
-every other participant provides. Secondly, so that there is a global payload
-type (PT) mapping for the various contents, so that clients only need to
-encode and payload each content that they provide once.
+Each participant in a Mingle conference announce the definitions of the
+contents that they provide in their MUC presence. This serves two purposes.
+Firstly, so that each participant knows which contents every other participant
+provides. Secondly, so that there is a global payload type (PT) mapping for
+the various contents, so that clients only need to encode and payload each
+content that they provide once.
 
 Participants can participate in a read-only mode by not advertising any
 contents. Participants are not obliged to initiate Jingle sessions with all
-- 
1.5.6.5