radeon.4 (radeon.man): Some fixes in the manual

[Bjarni Ingi Gislason]

  This was sent to Debian (bug #902555), which asked for it to be
reported upstream.

Package: xserver-xorg-video-radeon
Version: 1:18.0.1-1
Severity: minor
Tags: patch

Dear Maintainer,

  Summary of changes:

Remove superfluous quotation marks (") from the argument of a
single-font macro.

Use a better presentation for an ellipsis (with narrow space between
the periods).

Split long lines (> 80).

Begin a sentence on a new line if there is only one space separating
sentences.

Don't begin a sentence with a digit.

Add a comma after "e.g.".

Separate numbers from the units (with an unpaddable space).

Change - to \- if it shall be printed as a minus.

Change a two-fonts macro to an one-font macro for a
single argument.

Protect . if not an end of sentence.

Don't repeat a "long" word, but rephrase the text.

Use "tbl" to create a table, otherwise the text looks ugly with a
proportional font.

Protect . if not an end of sentence.

####

  The patch is in the attachment.

-- System Information:
Debian Release: buster/sid
  APT prefers stable-updates
  APT policy: (500, 'stable-updates'), (500, 'proposed-updates'), (500, 'testing'), (500, 'stable')
Architecture: amd64 (x86_64)

Kernel: Linux 4.9.110-1 (SMP w/2 CPU cores)
Locale: LANG=is_IS.iso88591, LC_CTYPE=is_IS.iso88591 (charmap=ISO-8859-1), LANGUAGE=is_IS.iso88591 (charmap=ISO-8859-1)
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/dash
Init: sysvinit (via /sbin/init)

Versions of packages xserver-xorg-video-radeon depends on:
ii  libc6                                  2.27-3
ii  libdrm-radeon1                         2.4.92-1
ii  libudev1                               238-5
ii  xserver-xorg-core [xorg-video-abi-23]  2:1.19.6-1

xserver-xorg-video-radeon recommends no packages.

Versions of packages xserver-xorg-video-radeon suggests:
ii  firmware-amd-graphics  20170823-1

-- no debconf information

-- 
Bjarni I. Gislason
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