[PATCH] vgaarbiter: documentation grammar correction
Bagas Sanjaya
bagasdotme at gmail.com
Sat Feb 8 03:06:47 UTC 2025
On Fri, Feb 07, 2025 at 10:23:25PM +0530, Pranav Tyagi wrote:
> Corrects the following grammatical issues in the VGA Arbiter documentation:
> - Fixes subject-verb agreement by changing "co-exists" to "co-exist"
> - Corrects pluralization by changing "server" to "servers"
> - Improves sentence structure for clarity
>
+Cc: DRM folks.
> Signed-off-by: Pranav Tyagi <pranav.tyagi03 at gmail.com>
> ---
> Documentation/gpu/vgaarbiter.rst | 6 +++---
> 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/Documentation/gpu/vgaarbiter.rst b/Documentation/gpu/vgaarbiter.rst
> index bde3c0afb059..d1e953712cc2 100644
> --- a/Documentation/gpu/vgaarbiter.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/gpu/vgaarbiter.rst
> @@ -11,9 +11,9 @@ Section 7, Legacy Devices.
>
> The Resource Access Control (RAC) module inside the X server [0] existed for
> the legacy VGA arbitration task (besides other bus management tasks) when more
> -than one legacy device co-exists on the same machine. But the problem happens
> +than one legacy device co-exist on the same machine. But the problem happens
> when these devices are trying to be accessed by different userspace clients
> -(e.g. two server in parallel). Their address assignments conflict. Moreover,
> +(e.g. two servers in parallel). Their address assignments conflict. Moreover,
> ideally, being a userspace application, it is not the role of the X server to
> control bus resources. Therefore an arbitration scheme outside of the X server
> is needed to control the sharing of these resources. This document introduces
> @@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ In-kernel interface
> libpciaccess
> ------------
>
> -To use the vga arbiter char device it was implemented an API inside the
> +To use the vga arbiter char device, an API was implemented inside the
> libpciaccess library. One field was added to struct pci_device (each device
> on the system)::
>
The diff looks OK.
Reviewed-by: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme at gmail.com>
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