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Wed Jan 13 08:49:15 PST 2016

source/text/shared/optionen/persona_firefox.xhp |   18 +++++++++---------
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commit 15b865721769943ba89a38d98f951fecd14d020d
Author: Adolfo Jayme Barrientos <fitojb at ubuntu.com>
Date:   Wed Jan 13 10:47:51 2016 -0600

    Copyedit the documentation on Firefox Themes
    
    It was so badly written I had trouble understanding it.
    
    Change-Id: I4b1172a2fc2e0a8028241188d15d0ea4388f1f25

diff --git a/source/text/shared/optionen/persona_firefox.xhp b/source/text/shared/optionen/persona_firefox.xhp
index ee3094e..8934ba2 100644
--- a/source/text/shared/optionen/persona_firefox.xhp
+++ b/source/text/shared/optionen/persona_firefox.xhp
@@ -41,10 +41,10 @@
 
 
 <paragraph id="par_idN10558" role="heading" xml-lang="en-US" level="1"><link href="text/shared/optionen/persona_firefox.xhp">Personalization</link></paragraph>
-<paragraph id="par_idN10568" role="paragraph" xml-lang="en-US">You can personalize your %PRODUCTNAME with the same themes available for Mozilla Firefox. The menu bar, upper toolbars and the bottom toolbars will display the chosen theme in their background.</paragraph>
+<paragraph id="par_idN10568" role="paragraph" xml-lang="en-US">You can customize %PRODUCTNAME with the same themes available for Mozilla Firefox. The menu bar and the toolbars docked in the top and bottom of the window will display the chosen theme in the background.</paragraph>
 </section>
 <paragraph id="par_id1309201511361016" role="tip" xml-lang="en-US">Mozilla Firefox themes are available at the Mozilla website at the following address: <link href="https://addons.mozilla.org/en-US/firefox/themes/">https://addons.mozilla.org/en-US/firefox/themes/</link>.</paragraph>
-<paragraph id="par_id1309201511361064" role="tip" xml-lang="en-US">Any Mozilla Firefox compliant theme will work with %PRODUCTNAME. However, not every theme will give good visual results. The bars background theme can interfere in menus and icons readability.</paragraph>
+<paragraph id="par_id1309201511361064" role="tip" xml-lang="en-US">Any Firefox-compliant theme will work with %PRODUCTNAME. However, not every theme will give good visual results—if the image is too busy, it could interfere with the readability of the icons and the menus.</paragraph>
 
 <section id="howtoget"><embed href="text/shared/00/00000406.xhp#personalization"/>
 </section>
@@ -53,26 +53,26 @@
 <paragraph id="par_id1309201511361076" role="paragraph" xml-lang="en-US">The following options are available:</paragraph>
 
 <paragraph id="hd_id1309201511361042" role="heading" xml-lang="en-US" level="3">Default look, do not use themes</paragraph>
-<paragraph id="par_id130920151136107" role="paragraph" xml-lang="en-US"><ahelp hid="cui/ui/personalization_tab/no_persona">The toolbars background inherit the background settings of the window manager of your desktop.</ahelp> This is the default for %PRODUCTNAME. </paragraph>
+<paragraph id="par_id130920151136107" role="paragraph" xml-lang="en-US"><ahelp hid="cui/ui/personalization_tab/no_persona">The toolbars’ background inherits the background settings of your desktop environment.</ahelp> This is the default setting in %PRODUCTNAME.</paragraph>
 
 <paragraph id="hd_id1309201511361088" role="heading" xml-lang="en-US" level="3">Pre-installed theme (if available)</paragraph>
-<paragraph id="par_id1309201511361194" role="paragraph" xml-lang="en-US"><ahelp hid="cui/ui/personalization_tab/default_persona">Display the system theme, if available.</ahelp>Your system administrator may have added a global (system wide) theme during the %PRODUCTNAME installation. This option will display it.</paragraph>
+<paragraph id="par_id1309201511361194" role="paragraph" xml-lang="en-US"><ahelp hid="cui/ui/personalization_tab/default_persona">Display the system theme, if available.</ahelp>Your system administrator may have added a global (system-wide) theme during the %PRODUCTNAME installation. This option will display it.</paragraph>
 
 <paragraph id="hd_id1309201511361072" role="heading" xml-lang="en-US" level="3">Own theme</paragraph>
-<paragraph id="par_id1309201511361168" role="paragraph" xml-lang="en-US"><ahelp hid="cui/ui/personalization_tab/own_persona">Choose this option to open the Select Firefox Theme dialog for more choices of themes.</ahelp></paragraph>
+<paragraph id="par_id1309201511361168" role="paragraph" xml-lang="en-US"><ahelp hid="cui/ui/personalization_tab/own_persona">Choose this option to open the “Select Firefox Theme” dialog and pick your own.</ahelp></paragraph>
 
 <bookmark xml-lang="en-US" branch="hid/cui/ui/select_persona_dialog/SelectPersonaDialog" id="bm_id6892839" localize="false"/>
 <paragraph id="hd_id1309201511361021" role="heading" xml-lang="en-US" level="2">Select Firefox Theme dialog</paragraph>
 <paragraph id="par_id1309201511361056" role="paragraph" xml-lang="en-US">This dialog allows you to install a specific theme or gives you a glimpse on other exciting themes from the Mozilla Firefox themes website.</paragraph>
 
 <paragraph id="hd_id1309201511361084" role="heading" xml-lang="en-US" level="3">Custom Search</paragraph>
-<paragraph id="par_id1309201511361068" role="paragraph" xml-lang="en-US"><ahelp hid="cui/ui/select_persona_dialog/search_term">Type or paste the URL of the theme page of the Mozilla Firefox themes website.</ahelp> To get the URL, navigate with your computer browser to the theme web page and copy the URL displayed in the navigation bar of your browser. Then paste it in the text area of the dialog. Click in the <item type="menuitem">Search</item> button to download and install it in %PRODUCTNAME.</paragraph>
+<paragraph id="par_id1309201511361068" role="paragraph" xml-lang="en-US"><ahelp hid="cui/ui/select_persona_dialog/search_term">Type or paste the URL of the theme’s webpage.</ahelp> To get the URL, navigate with your browser to the theme’s webpage and copy the URL displayed in the navigation bar of your browser. Then paste it in the dialog’s text box. Click the <item type="menuitem">Search</item> button to download and install it in %PRODUCTNAME.</paragraph>
 
-<paragraph id="hd_id1309201511361099" role="heading" xml-lang="en-US" level="3">Suggested Themes By Category</paragraph>
+<paragraph id="hd_id1309201511361099" role="heading" xml-lang="en-US" level="3">Suggested Themes by Category</paragraph>
 <paragraph id="par_id1309201511361087" role="paragraph" xml-lang="en-US"><ahelp hid="cui/ui/select_persona_dialog/frame4">Shows a random choice of nine themes based on the categories displayed in the buttons.</ahelp></paragraph>
-<paragraph id="par_id130920151136105" role="paragraph" xml-lang="en-US">Click in one of the 5 buttons to display in the image area below a random choice of nine themes tagged by the button category.</paragraph>
+<paragraph id="par_id130920151136105" role="paragraph" xml-lang="en-US">Click one of the five buttons to display in the image area below a random choice of nine themes corresponding to the category indicated in the button.</paragraph>
 <paragraph id="par_id1309201511361079" role="paragraph" xml-lang="en-US">To select one of the displayed themes, click on its image and press <item type="menuitem">OK</item>.</paragraph>
-<paragraph id="par_id1309201511361094" role="warning" xml-lang="en-US">Since the themes will be fetched from the Mozilla Firefox theme website, you may have to wait some minutes to have all nine themes image filled. Please be patient.</paragraph>
+<paragraph id="par_id1309201511361094" role="warning" xml-lang="en-US">Since the themes will be fetched from the Mozilla Firefox theme website, you may have to wait some time to have all nine themes image filled. Please be patient.</paragraph>
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