[packagekit] FINAL Draft Ready for Review: Ch. 2: PackageKit

Douglas Silas dhensley at redhat.com
Wed Oct 7 08:54:03 PDT 2009


The PackageKit chapter of the Fedora 12 Deployment Guide is in final 
draft stage. The fine-pick comb has already been applied. Only 
content corrections should be applied at this point. Thanks to 
Richard Hughes, Rahul Sundaram, Rahul Kavalapara for their helpful 
2nd draft reviews and suggestions

Notable changes:

* addition of a short discussion on, and screenshot of, the Software 
Update Preferences window, for setting update-checking intervals. 
(Rahul Kavalapara pointed out this omission--thanks!)
* all screenshots now correct; all but three have "Figure X: 
description" captions
* entire chapter now formatted (i.e. the bold has been applied)

Review and feedback on this chapter is still welcome.

For details on how to get involved in the Fedora 12 Deployment Guide 
update, see the project page (and join the mailing list) at:

https://fedorahosted.org/deploymentguide/

-- 
Douglas Silas
Technical Writer | Red Hat, Inc.




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