[Spice-devel] [spice-gtk v3] Add man page

[Christophe Fergeau]

On Fri, Apr 04, 2014 at 12:21:47PM -0500, Jonathon Jongsma wrote:
> Just a couple minor nitpicks below.  Otherwise ACK.
> 
> 
> 'accesss' has an extra 's'.  Also, "allowing to access" sounds a bit
> awkward.  "allowing access to" might be a bit better? "It's" doesn't
> need to be capitalized. The last sentence implies that eventually we
> might be able to access remote vms over some other protocol ;)  Suggest
> the following:
>         
>         Spice-GTK is a library allowing access to remote displays over
>         the
>         SPICE protocol. At the moment It's mainly used to access remote
>         virtual machines.
> 

Thanks, I've used your suggested wording.

> 
> > +
> > +The Spice-GTK library provides a set of command line options which
> > +can be used to tweak how some SPICE-specific option.
> 
> 
> The previous sentence seems unfinished.

Extra 'how', I'll remove it.

Thanks!

Christophe
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