[Spice-devel] [PATCH spice-common 1/2] docs: Fix typos and grammar

Snir Sheriber ssheribe at redhat.com
Wed Nov 21 09:29:47 UTC 2018


Hi,


On 11/21/2018 11:14 AM, Frediano Ziglio wrote:
> Signed-off-by: Frediano Ziglio <fziglio at redhat.com>
> ---
>   docs/spice_protocol.txt | 16 ++++++++--------
>   1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/docs/spice_protocol.txt b/docs/spice_protocol.txt
> index b205743..5e13c93 100644
> --- a/docs/spice_protocol.txt
> +++ b/docs/spice_protocol.txt
> @@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ Enumerations and flags
>   ----------------------
>   
>   It's possible to specify enumerations and flags. The difference is that flags are defined as 2 power
> -values and can combined. Enumerations and flags must have a size (`8`, `16` or `32`) specified.
> +values and can be combined. Enumerations and flags must have a size (`8`, `16` or `32`) specified.
>   
>       enum ::= <enum_type> "{" [ <enumflag_items> ] "}" <attributes> ";" ;
>       flag ::= <flag_type> "{" [ <enumflag_items> ] "}" <attributes> ";" ;
> @@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ to handle not using autogenerated code and also use more space on the network.
>   Arrays
>   ------
>   
> -As seen above the easiest way to define an array size is specifiying a constant value.
> +As seen above the easiest way to define an array size is specifying a constant value.
>   However there are multiple way to specify the size
>   
>       array_size ::= <integer>|<identifier>|""|<array_size_image>|<array_size_bytes>|<array_size_cstring> ;
> @@ -137,7 +137,7 @@ in another field, for instance
>       int8 name[name_len];
>   
>   allows to put a name of `name_len` len.
> -The empty value tell that the array will end when the containing message end so if we have
> +The empty value tells that the array will end when the containing message end so if we have
>   
>       int8 name[];
>   
> @@ -173,7 +173,7 @@ we'll have the `foo` name. Note that the field does not need to end the message
>   Structures
>   ----------
>   
> -The simpler coumpound type is the structure. As in C is defined as a list of fields (any variable or swicth).
> +The simplest coumpound type is the structure. As in C is defined as a list of fields (any variable or swicth).

Also swicth

>   But as a protocol definition there are no alignment or padding and every field (beside pointer values) follow each other.
>   
>       struct ::= "struct" <identifier> "{" [ <fields> ] "}" <attributes> ";" ;
> @@ -190,7 +190,7 @@ Example:
>   Messages
>   --------
>   
> -Messages have the same syntax of structure (beside `message`) with the different that they can
> +Messages have the same syntax of structure (beside `message`) with the difference that they can
>   be used directly inside channels.
>   
>       message ::= "message" <identifier> "{" [ <fields> ] "}" <attributes> ";" ;
> @@ -266,7 +266,7 @@ Attributes
>   ----------
>   
>   As you probably noted attributed can be specified for lot of definitions.
> -They allow to change code generated or specific contraints to the protocol.
> +They allow to change code generated or specific constraints of the protocol.
>   
>       attributes ::= ""|<attributes><attribute>|<attribute> ;
>       attribute ::= <attribute_name> [ "(" <attribute_values> ")" ] ;
> @@ -302,7 +302,7 @@ will be marshalled into a C structure like
>   prefix
>   ~~~~~~
>   
> -This attribute allow to specify the prefix used for generated enumerations (both
> +This attribute allows to specify the prefix used for generated enumerations (both
>   protocol enumerations and flags generate C enumerations). By default the enumeration
>   will use upper case of the enum/flag name prefixed with `SPICE_` and followed by item so
>   
> @@ -339,7 +339,7 @@ will generate
>   end
>   ~~~
>   
> -This attribute specify that the data will be appended/embedded in the final C structure.
> +This attribute specifies that the data will be appended/embedded in the final C structure.
>   
>   Example:
>   

With this fix I'd ack (not a native speaker though).



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