[systemd-commits] 3 commits - man/sd-id128.xml man/tmpfiles.d.xml

Lennart Poettering lennart at kemper.freedesktop.org
Mon Jul 9 06:58:51 PDT 2012


 man/sd-id128.xml   |   12 ++++++------
 man/tmpfiles.d.xml |    2 +-
 2 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

New commits:
commit 40b90434832c373c1394bc502523bee39c279c24
Author: Paul Menzel <paulepanter at users.sourceforge.net>
Date:   Sat Jul 7 13:09:18 2012 +0200

    man/sd-id128: Fix endian*n*ess
    
    At least Wikipedia writes it that way [1].
    
    [1] https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Endianness

diff --git a/man/sd-id128.xml b/man/sd-id128.xml
index db664f8..ea4e3a4 100644
--- a/man/sd-id128.xml
+++ b/man/sd-id128.xml
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@
                 <para>This union type allows accessing the 128 bit ID
                 as 16 separate bytes or two 64 bit words. It is generally
                 safer to access the ID components by their 8 bit array
-                to avoid endianess issues. This union is intended to
+                to avoid endianness issues. This union is intended to
                 be passed call-by-value (as opposed to
                 call-by-reference) and may be directly manipulated by
                 clients.</para>

commit bfc79e342f7f419adf10cfefd3b27b3af656db0d
Author: Paul Menzel <paulepanter at users.sourceforge.net>
Date:   Sat Jul 7 13:03:27 2012 +0200

    man/sd-id128: Fix typos, grammar and wording
    
    • 2 was replaced by »two« in one place to avoid some ambiguity.

diff --git a/man/sd-id128.xml b/man/sd-id128.xml
index cbc130d..db664f8 100644
--- a/man/sd-id128.xml
+++ b/man/sd-id128.xml
@@ -80,8 +80,8 @@
                 <para>See
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>sd_id128_to_string</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry> and
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>sd_id128_randomize</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry>
-                for more information about the functions
-                implemented.</para>
+                for more information about the implemented
+                functions.</para>
 
                 <para>A 128 bit ID is implemented as the following
                 union type:</para>
@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@
 } sd_id128_t;</programlisting>
 
                 <para>This union type allows accessing the 128 bit ID
-                as 16 separate bytes or 2 64 bit words. It is generally
+                as 16 separate bytes or two 64 bit words. It is generally
                 safer to access the ID components by their 8 bit array
                 to avoid endianess issues. This union is intended to
                 be passed call-by-value (as opposed to
@@ -137,13 +137,13 @@
                 <para>Note that new, randomized IDs may be generated
                 with
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>journalctl</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>'s
-                <literal>--new-id</literal> command.</para>
+                <literal>--new-id</literal> option.</para>
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
                 <title>Notes</title>
 
-                <para>These APIs are implemented as shared library,
+                <para>These APIs are implemented as a shared library,
                 which can be compiled and linked to with the
                 <literal>libsystemd-id128</literal>
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>pkg-config</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>

commit 1532449274704529244071160a61814a451b3501
Author: Paul Menzel <paulepanter at users.sourceforge.net>
Date:   Mon Jul 2 17:43:34 2012 +0200

    man/tmpfiles.d.xml: Add missing full stop

diff --git a/man/tmpfiles.d.xml b/man/tmpfiles.d.xml
index 96b1872..b7397b6 100644
--- a/man/tmpfiles.d.xml
+++ b/man/tmpfiles.d.xml
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@
                 alphabetical order, regardless in which of the
                 directories they reside, to guarantee that a specific
                 configuration file takes precedence over another file
-                with an alphabetically later name</para>
+                with an alphabetically later name.</para>
 
                 <para>If the administrator wants to disable a
                 configuration file supplied by the vendor the



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