[systemd-commits] src/timedate
Lennart Poettering
lennart at kemper.freedesktop.org
Mon Mar 24 12:49:53 PDT 2014
src/timedate/timedate-sntp.c | 28 ++++++++++++++--------------
src/timedate/timedatectl.c | 25 ++++++++++++-------------
src/timedate/timedated.c | 25 ++++++++++++-------------
3 files changed, 38 insertions(+), 40 deletions(-)
New commits:
commit 07a062a79374406e8f6b5a1e2f80c80baf031567
Author: Jason St. John <jstjohn at purdue.edu>
Date: Tue Mar 18 00:27:05 2014 -0400
timedate: fix numerous grammar errors in comments and output/debug messages
diff --git a/src/timedate/timedate-sntp.c b/src/timedate/timedate-sntp.c
index 880b467..e47a086 100644
--- a/src/timedate/timedate-sntp.c
+++ b/src/timedate/timedate-sntp.c
@@ -205,7 +205,7 @@ static int sntp_send_request(SNTPContext *sntp) {
* matching answer to our request.
*
* The actual value does not matter, We do not care about the correct
- * NTP UINT_MAX fraction, we just pass the plain nanosecond value.
+ * NTP UINT_MAX fraction; we just pass the plain nanosecond value.
*/
clock_gettime(CLOCK_MONOTONIC, &sntp->trans_time_mon);
clock_gettime(CLOCK_REALTIME, &sntp->trans_time);
@@ -293,7 +293,7 @@ static int sntp_clock_watch(sd_event_source *source, int fd, uint32_t revents, v
}
/* resync */
- log_info("System time changed, resyncing.");
+ log_info("System time changed. Resyncing.");
sntp->poll_resync = true;
sntp_send_request(sntp);
@@ -499,24 +499,24 @@ static int sntp_receive_response(sd_event_source *source, int fd, uint32_t reven
int r;
if (revents & (EPOLLHUP|EPOLLERR)) {
- log_debug("Server connection returned error, closing.");
+ log_debug("Server connection returned error. Closing.");
sntp_server_disconnect(sntp);
return -ENOTCONN;
}
len = recvmsg(fd, &msghdr, MSG_DONTWAIT);
if (len < 0) {
- log_debug("Error receiving message, disconnecting");
+ log_debug("Error receiving message. Disconnecting.");
return -EINVAL;
}
if (iov.iov_len < sizeof(struct ntp_msg)) {
- log_debug("Invalid response from server, disconnecting");
+ log_debug("Invalid response from server. Disconnecting.");
return -EINVAL;
}
if (sntp->server_addr.sin_addr.s_addr != server_addr.sin_addr.s_addr) {
- log_debug("Response from unknown server, disconnecting");
+ log_debug("Response from unknown server. Disconnecting.");
return -EINVAL;
}
@@ -532,35 +532,35 @@ static int sntp_receive_response(sd_event_source *source, int fd, uint32_t reven
}
}
if (!recv_time) {
- log_debug("Invalid packet timestamp, disconnecting");
+ log_debug("Invalid packet timestamp. Disconnecting.");
return -EINVAL;
}
ntpmsg = iov.iov_base;
if (!sntp->pending) {
- log_debug("Unexpected reply, ignoring");
+ log_debug("Unexpected reply. Ignoring.");
return 0;
}
/* check our "time cookie" (we just stored nanoseconds in the fraction field) */
- if (be32toh(ntpmsg->origin_time.sec) != sntp->trans_time.tv_sec + OFFSET_1900_1970||
+ if (be32toh(ntpmsg->origin_time.sec) != sntp->trans_time.tv_sec + OFFSET_1900_1970 ||
be32toh(ntpmsg->origin_time.frac) != sntp->trans_time.tv_nsec) {
- log_debug("Invalid reply, not our transmit time, ignoring");
+ log_debug("Invalid reply; not our transmit time. Ignoring.");
return 0;
}
if (NTP_FIELD_LEAP(ntpmsg->field) == NTP_LEAP_NOTINSYNC) {
- log_debug("Server is not synchronized, disconnecting");
+ log_debug("Server is not synchronized. Disconnecting.");
return -EINVAL;
}
if (NTP_FIELD_VERSION(ntpmsg->field) != 4) {
- log_debug("Response NTPv%d, disconnecting", NTP_FIELD_VERSION(ntpmsg->field));
+ log_debug("Response NTPv%d. Disconnecting.", NTP_FIELD_VERSION(ntpmsg->field));
return -EINVAL;
}
if (NTP_FIELD_MODE(ntpmsg->field) != NTP_MODE_SERVER) {
- log_debug("Unsupported mode %d, disconnecting", NTP_FIELD_MODE(ntpmsg->field));
+ log_debug("Unsupported mode %d. Disconnecting.", NTP_FIELD_MODE(ntpmsg->field));
return -EINVAL;
}
@@ -584,7 +584,7 @@ static int sntp_receive_response(sd_event_source *source, int fd, uint32_t reven
* Transmit Timestamp T3 time reply sent by server
* Destination Timestamp T4 time reply received by client
*
- * The roundtrip delay d and system clock offset t are defined as:
+ * The round-trip delay, d, and system clock offset, t, are defined as:
* d = (T4 - T1) - (T3 - T2) t = ((T2 - T1) + (T3 - T4)) / 2"
*/
clock_gettime(CLOCK_MONOTONIC, &now_ts);
diff --git a/src/timedate/timedatectl.c b/src/timedate/timedatectl.c
index 089a5fe..0664f69 100644
--- a/src/timedate/timedatectl.c
+++ b/src/timedate/timedatectl.c
@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@ static void print_status_info(const StatusInfo *i) {
/* Enforce the values of /etc/localtime */
if (getenv("TZ")) {
- fprintf(stderr, "Warning: ignoring the TZ variable, reading the system's timezone setting only.\n\n");
+ fprintf(stderr, "Warning: Ignoring the TZ variable. Reading the system's time zone setting only.\n\n");
unsetenv("TZ");
}
@@ -120,7 +120,7 @@ static void print_status_info(const StatusInfo *i) {
sec = time(NULL);
have_time = true;
} else
- fprintf(stderr, "Warning: could not get time from timedated and not operating locally.\n\n");
+ fprintf(stderr, "Warning: Could not get time from timedated and not operating locally.\n\n");
if (have_time) {
zero(tm);
@@ -151,7 +151,7 @@ static void print_status_info(const StatusInfo *i) {
zero(tm);
assert_se(strftime(a, sizeof(a), "%Z, %z", localtime_r(&sec, &tm)) > 0);
char_array_0(a);
- printf(" Timezone: %s (%s)\n"
+ printf(" Time zone: %s (%s)\n"
" NTP enabled: %s\n"
"NTP synchronized: %s\n"
" RTC in local TZ: %s\n",
@@ -198,10 +198,10 @@ static void print_status_info(const StatusInfo *i) {
if (i->rtc_local)
fputs("\n" ANSI_HIGHLIGHT_ON
- "Warning: The RTC is configured to maintain time in the local timezone. This\n"
+ "Warning: The RTC is configured to maintain time in the local time zone. This\n"
" mode is not fully supported and will create various problems with time\n"
- " zone changes and daylight saving adjustments. If at all possible use\n"
- " RTC in UTC, by calling 'timedatectl set-local-rtc 0'" ANSI_HIGHLIGHT_OFF ".\n", stdout);
+ " zone changes and daylight saving time adjustments. If at all possible, use\n"
+ " RTC in UTC by calling 'timedatectl set-local-rtc 0'" ANSI_HIGHLIGHT_OFF ".\n", stdout);
}
static int show_status(sd_bus *bus, char **args, unsigned n) {
@@ -286,7 +286,7 @@ static int set_timezone(sd_bus *bus, char **args, unsigned n) {
NULL,
"sb", args[1], arg_ask_password);
if (r < 0)
- log_error("Failed to set timezone: %s", bus_error_message(&error, -r));
+ log_error("Failed to set time zone: %s", bus_error_message(&error, -r));
return r;
}
@@ -359,7 +359,7 @@ static int list_timezones(sd_bus *bus, char **args, unsigned n) {
f = fopen("/usr/share/zoneinfo/zone.tab", "re");
if (!f) {
- log_error("Failed to open timezone database: %m");
+ log_error("Failed to open time zone database: %m");
return -errno;
}
@@ -371,7 +371,7 @@ static int list_timezones(sd_bus *bus, char **args, unsigned n) {
if (feof(f))
break;
- log_error("Failed to read timezone database: %m");
+ log_error("Failed to read time zone database: %m");
return -errno;
}
@@ -380,7 +380,6 @@ static int list_timezones(sd_bus *bus, char **args, unsigned n) {
if (isempty(p) || *p == '#')
continue;
-
/* Skip over country code */
p += strcspn(p, WHITESPACE);
p += strspn(p, WHITESPACE);
@@ -423,7 +422,7 @@ static int help(void) {
printf("%s [OPTIONS...] COMMAND ...\n\n"
"Query or change system time and date settings.\n\n"
- " -h --help Show this help\n"
+ " -h --help Show this help message\n"
" --version Show package version\n"
" --no-pager Do not pipe output into a pager\n"
" --no-ask-password Do not prompt for password\n"
@@ -433,8 +432,8 @@ static int help(void) {
"Commands:\n"
" status Show current time settings\n"
" set-time TIME Set system time\n"
- " set-timezone ZONE Set system timezone\n"
- " list-timezones Show known timezones\n"
+ " set-timezone ZONE Set system time zone\n"
+ " list-timezones Show known time zones\n"
" set-local-rtc BOOL Control whether RTC is in local time\n"
" set-ntp BOOL Control whether NTP is enabled\n",
program_invocation_short_name);
diff --git a/src/timedate/timedated.c b/src/timedate/timedated.c
index c4a797a..3895e32 100644
--- a/src/timedate/timedated.c
+++ b/src/timedate/timedated.c
@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@ static int context_read_data(Context *c) {
r = readlink_malloc("/etc/localtime", &t);
if (r < 0) {
if (r == -EINVAL)
- log_warning("/etc/localtime should be a symbolic link to a timezone data file in /usr/share/zoneinfo/.");
+ log_warning("/etc/localtime should be a symbolic link to a time zone data file in /usr/share/zoneinfo/.");
else
log_warning("Failed to get target of /etc/localtime: %s", strerror(-r));
} else {
@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@ static int context_read_data(Context *c) {
e = path_startswith(t, "../usr/share/zoneinfo/");
if (!e)
- log_warning("/etc/localtime should be a symbolic link to a timezone data file in /usr/share/zoneinfo/.");
+ log_warning("/etc/localtime should be a symbolic link to a time zone data file in /usr/share/zoneinfo/.");
else {
c->zone = strdup(e);
if (!c->zone)
@@ -263,9 +263,8 @@ static char** get_ntp_services(void) {
char line[PATH_MAX], *l;
if (!fgets(line, sizeof(line), f)) {
-
if (ferror(f))
- log_error("Failed to read NTP units file: %m");
+ log_error("Failed to read NTP unit file: %m");
break;
}
@@ -313,7 +312,7 @@ static int context_read_ntp(Context *c, sd_bus *bus) {
*i);
if (r < 0) {
- /* This implementation does not exist, try next one */
+ /* This implementation does not exist. Try the next one. */
if (sd_bus_error_has_name(&error, SD_BUS_ERROR_FILE_NOT_FOUND))
continue;
@@ -376,7 +375,7 @@ static int context_start_ntp(Context *c, sd_bus *bus, sd_bus_error *error) {
if (sd_bus_error_has_name(error, SD_BUS_ERROR_FILE_NOT_FOUND) ||
sd_bus_error_has_name(error, "org.freedesktop.systemd1.LoadFailed") ||
sd_bus_error_has_name(error, "org.freedesktop.systemd1.NoSuchUnit")) {
- /* This implementation does not exist, try next one */
+ /* This implementation does not exist. Try the next one. */
sd_bus_error_free(error);
continue;
}
@@ -425,7 +424,7 @@ static int context_enable_ntp(Context*c, sd_bus *bus, sd_bus_error *error) {
if (r < 0) {
if (sd_bus_error_has_name(error, SD_BUS_ERROR_FILE_NOT_FOUND)) {
- /* This implementation does not exist, try next one */
+ /* This implementation does not exist. Try the next one. */
sd_bus_error_free(error);
continue;
}
@@ -468,10 +467,10 @@ static int property_get_rtc_time(
zero(tm);
r = hwclock_get_time(&tm);
if (r == -EBUSY) {
- log_warning("/dev/rtc is busy, is somebody keeping it open continuously? That's not a good idea... Returning a bogus RTC timestamp.");
+ log_warning("/dev/rtc is busy. Is somebody keeping it open continuously? That's not a good idea... Returning a bogus RTC timestamp.");
t = 0;
} else if (r == -ENOENT) {
- log_debug("Not /dev/rtc found.");
+ log_debug("/dev/rtc not found.");
t = 0; /* no RTC found */
} else if (r < 0)
return sd_bus_error_set_errnof(error, r, "Failed to read RTC: %s", strerror(-r));
@@ -542,8 +541,8 @@ static int method_set_timezone(sd_bus *bus, sd_bus_message *m, void *userdata, s
/* 1. Write new configuration file */
r = context_write_data_timezone(c);
if (r < 0) {
- log_error("Failed to set timezone: %s", strerror(-r));
- return sd_bus_error_set_errnof(error, r, "Failed to set timezone: %s", strerror(-r));
+ log_error("Failed to set time zone: %s", strerror(-r));
+ return sd_bus_error_set_errnof(error, r, "Failed to set time zone: %s", strerror(-r));
}
/* 2. Tell the kernel our timezone */
@@ -562,7 +561,7 @@ static int method_set_timezone(sd_bus *bus, sd_bus_message *m, void *userdata, s
log_struct(LOG_INFO,
MESSAGE_ID(SD_MESSAGE_TIMEZONE_CHANGE),
"TIMEZONE=%s", c->zone,
- "MESSAGE=Changed timezone to '%s'.", c->zone,
+ "MESSAGE=Changed time zone to '%s'.", c->zone,
NULL);
sd_bus_emit_properties_changed(bus, "/org/freedesktop/timedate1", "org.freedesktop.timedate1", "Timezone", NULL);
@@ -847,7 +846,7 @@ int main(int argc, char *argv[]) {
r = context_read_data(&context);
if (r < 0) {
- log_error("Failed to read timezone data: %s", strerror(-r));
+ log_error("Failed to read time zone data: %s", strerror(-r));
goto finish;
}
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