[systemd-commits] 3 commits - man/sd_bus_path_encode.xml man/systemd.exec.xml man/systemd-gpt-auto-generator.xml man/systemd.link.xml man/systemd-networkd.service.xml man/systemd.network.xml man/systemd-nspawn.xml man/systemd.resource-control.xml man/systemd-update-utmp.service.xml NEWS README TODO

Tom Gundersen tomegun at kemper.freedesktop.org
Tue May 6 14:09:49 PDT 2014


 NEWS                                |   46 ++++++++++++++++++------------------
 README                              |    4 +--
 TODO                                |   38 ++++++++++++++---------------
 man/sd_bus_path_encode.xml          |    4 +--
 man/systemd-gpt-auto-generator.xml  |   12 ++++-----
 man/systemd-networkd.service.xml    |    2 -
 man/systemd-nspawn.xml              |    4 +--
 man/systemd-update-utmp.service.xml |    2 -
 man/systemd.exec.xml                |    6 ++--
 man/systemd.link.xml                |   14 +++++-----
 man/systemd.network.xml             |    6 ++--
 man/systemd.resource-control.xml    |    2 -
 12 files changed, 70 insertions(+), 70 deletions(-)

New commits:
commit b588c2d1b7e5058c6fb65ef958c796449679f6fb
Author: Jan Engelhardt <jengelh at inai.de>
Date:   Sat May 3 19:15:27 2014 +0200

    doc: adhere to XML syntax

diff --git a/man/systemd.resource-control.xml b/man/systemd.resource-control.xml
index 5a996fd..80c365b 100644
--- a/man/systemd.resource-control.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.resource-control.xml
@@ -139,7 +139,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
           absolute time (suffixed by one of the common time units, us,
           ms, s, ...). The percentage specifies how much CPU time the
           unit shall get at maximum, relative to the total CPU time
-          available on one CPU. Use values > 100% for alloting CPU
+          available on one CPU. Use values > 100% for alloting CPU
           time on more than one CPU. If an absolute time is specified
           the processes of this unit will get this much absolute time
           within each quota period, at maximum. This controls the

commit 70a44afee385c4afadaab9a002b3f9dd44aedf4a
Author: Jan Engelhardt <jengelh at inai.de>
Date:   Sat May 3 19:15:24 2014 +0200

    doc: typographical fine tuning

diff --git a/NEWS b/NEWS
index 5ca6c03..ac2cf41 100644
--- a/NEWS
+++ b/NEWS
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ CHANGES WITH 212:
           on a partition to ignore it during automatic discovery.
 
         * Two new GPT type UUIDs have been added for automatic root
-          partition discovery, for 32bit and 64bit ARM. This is not
+          partition discovery, for 32-bit and 64-bit ARM. This is not
           particularly useful for discovering the root directory on
           these architectures during bare-metal boots (since UEFI is
           not common there), but still very useful to allow booting of
@@ -769,7 +769,7 @@ CHANGES WITH 209:
 
         * systemd-nspawn gained a new --personality= switch for
           setting the kernel personality for the container. This is
-          useful when running a 32bit container on a 64bit host. A
+          useful when running a 32-bit container on a 64-bit host. A
           similar option Personality= is now also available in service
           units.
 
diff --git a/README b/README
index 795db89..ef8c620 100644
--- a/README
+++ b/README
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ REQUIREMENTS:
         If systemd is compiled with libseccomp support on
         architectures which do not use socketcall() and where seccomp
         is supported (this effectively means x86-64 and ARM, but
-        excludes 32bit x86!), then nspawn will now install a
+        excludes 32-bit x86!), then nspawn will now install a
         work-around seccomp filter that makes containers boot even
         with audit being enabled. This works correctly only on kernels
         3.14 and newer though. TL;DR: turn audit off, still.
diff --git a/TODO b/TODO
index 7fcb511..db59984 100644
--- a/TODO
+++ b/TODO
@@ -575,7 +575,7 @@ Features:
 
 * support crash reporting operation modes (https://live.gnome.org/GnomeOS/Design/Whiteboards/ProblemReporting)
 
-* default to actual 32bit PIDs, via /proc/sys/kernel/pid_max
+* default to actual 32-bit PIDs, via /proc/sys/kernel/pid_max
 
 * be able to specify a forced restart of service A where service B depends on, in case B
   needs to be auto-respawned?
diff --git a/man/sd_bus_path_encode.xml b/man/sd_bus_path_encode.xml
index 2cc720f..7cb8e77 100644
--- a/man/sd_bus_path_encode.xml
+++ b/man/sd_bus_path_encode.xml
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
     reversed with <function>sd_bus_decode()</function>. It is
     recommended to only use external identifiers here that generally
     require little escaping to be turned into valid bus path
-    identifiers (for example by sticking to a 7bit ASCII character
+    identifiers (for example by sticking to a 7-bit ASCII character
     set), in order to ensure the resulting bus path is still short and
     easily processed.</para>
 
diff --git a/man/systemd-gpt-auto-generator.xml b/man/systemd-gpt-auto-generator.xml
index db98582..32e1183 100644
--- a/man/systemd-gpt-auto-generator.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-gpt-auto-generator.xml
@@ -106,22 +106,22 @@
                                         <row>
                                                 <entry>44479540-f297-41b2-9af7-d131d5f0458a</entry>
                                                 <entry><filename>Root Partition (x86)</filename></entry>
-                                                <entry>On 32bit x86 systems the first x86 root partition on the disk the EFI ESP is located on is mounted to the root directory <filename>/</filename>.</entry>
+                                                <entry>On 32-bit x86 systems the first x86 root partition on the disk the EFI ESP is located on is mounted to the root directory <filename>/</filename>.</entry>
                                         </row>
                                         <row>
                                                 <entry>4f68bce3-e8cd-4db1-96e7-fbcaf984b709</entry>
                                                 <entry><filename>Root Partition (x86-64)</filename></entry>
-                                                <entry>On 64bit x86 systems the first x86-64 root partition on the disk the EFI ESP is located on is mounted to the root directory <filename>/</filename>.</entry>
+                                                <entry>On 64-bit x86 systems the first x86-64 root partition on the disk the EFI ESP is located on is mounted to the root directory <filename>/</filename>.</entry>
                                         </row>
                                         <row>
                                                 <entry>69dad710-2ce4-4e3c-b16c-21a1d49abed3</entry>
-                                                <entry><filename>Root Partition (32bit ARM)</filename></entry>
-                                                <entry>On 32bit ARM systems the first ARM root partition on the disk the EFI ESP is located on is mounted to the root directory <filename>/</filename>.</entry>
+                                                <entry><filename>Root Partition (32-bit ARM)</filename></entry>
+                                                <entry>On 32-bit ARM systems the first ARM root partition on the disk the EFI ESP is located on is mounted to the root directory <filename>/</filename>.</entry>
                                         </row>
                                         <row>
                                                 <entry>b921b045-1df0-41c3-af44-4c6f280d3fae</entry>
-                                                <entry><filename>Root Partition (64bit ARM)</filename></entry>
-                                                <entry>On 64bit ARM systems the first ARM root partition on the disk the EFI ESP is located on is mounted to the root directory <filename>/</filename>.</entry>
+                                                <entry><filename>Root Partition (64-bit ARM)</filename></entry>
+                                                <entry>On 64-bit ARM systems the first ARM root partition on the disk the EFI ESP is located on is mounted to the root directory <filename>/</filename>.</entry>
                                         </row>
                                         <row>
                                                 <entry>933ac7e1-2eb4-4f13-b844-0e14e2aef915</entry>
diff --git a/man/systemd-networkd.service.xml b/man/systemd-networkd.service.xml
index 85fa2a4..75ea1a4 100644
--- a/man/systemd-networkd.service.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-networkd.service.xml
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@
                 <para>Network configurations applied before networkd is started
                 are not removed, and static configuration applied by networkd
                 is not removed when networkd exits. Dynamic configuration applied by
-                networkd may also optionally be left in place on shut-down. This ensures
+                networkd may also optionally be left in place on shutdown. This ensures
                 restarting networkd does not cut the network connection, and, in particular,
                 that it is safe to transition between the initrd and the real root,
                 and back.</para>
diff --git a/man/systemd-nspawn.xml b/man/systemd-nspawn.xml
index 648a8cd..1894616 100644
--- a/man/systemd-nspawn.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-nspawn.xml
@@ -221,7 +221,7 @@
 
                                 <listitem><para>After transitioning
                                 into the container, change to the
-                                specified user defined in the
+                                specified user-defined in the
                                 container's user database. Like all
                                 other systemd-nspawn features, this is
                                 not a security feature and provides
@@ -600,7 +600,7 @@
                                 <literal>x86</literal> and
                                 <literal>x86-64</literal> are
                                 supported. This is useful when running
-                                a 32bit container on a 64bit
+                                a 32-bit container on a 64-bit
                                 host. If this setting is not used
                                 the personality reported in the
                                 container is the same as the one
diff --git a/man/systemd-update-utmp.service.xml b/man/systemd-update-utmp.service.xml
index 846fc95..0b316b1 100644
--- a/man/systemd-update-utmp.service.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-update-utmp.service.xml
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@
                 is a service that writes SysV runlevel changes to utmp
                 and wtmp, as well as the audit logs, as they
                 occur. <filename>systemd-update-utmp.service</filename>
-                does the same for system reboots and shut-down requests.</para>
+                does the same for system reboots and shutdown requests.</para>
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
diff --git a/man/systemd.exec.xml b/man/systemd.exec.xml
index 5d39bd1..d206d4f 100644
--- a/man/systemd.exec.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.exec.xml
@@ -1204,7 +1204,7 @@
                                 (which creates connected AF_UNIX
                                 sockets only) are unaffected. Note
                                 that this option has no effect on
-                                32bit x86 and is ignored (but works
+                                32-bit x86 and is ignored (but works
                                 correctly on x86-64). If running in user
                                 mode and this option is used,
                                 <varname>NoNewPrivileges=yes</varname>
@@ -1239,8 +1239,8 @@
                                 processes. Takes one of
                                 <constant>x86</constant> and
                                 <constant>x86-64</constant>. This is
-                                useful when running 32bit services on
-                                a 64bit host system. If not specified
+                                useful when running 32-bit services on
+                                a 64-bit host system. If not specified
                                 the personality is left unmodified and
                                 thus reflects the personality of the
                                 host system's
diff --git a/man/systemd.link.xml b/man/systemd.link.xml
index 3ad006e..2f5de23 100644
--- a/man/systemd.link.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.link.xml
@@ -236,8 +236,8 @@
                                                         <listitem>
                                                                 <para>The name is set based on entries in
                                                                 the udev's Hardware Database with the key
-                                                                <literal>ID_NET_NAME_FROM_DATABASE</literal>
-                                                                .</para>
+                                                                <literal>ID_NET_NAME_FROM_DATABASE</literal>.
+                                                                </para>
                                                         </listitem>
                                                 </varlistentry>
                                                 <varlistentry>
@@ -245,8 +245,8 @@
                                                         <listitem>
                                                                 <para>The name is set based on information given by
                                                                 the firmware for on-board devices, as exported by
-                                                                the udev property <literal>ID_NET_NAME_ONBOARD</literal>
-                                                                .</para>
+                                                                the udev property <literal>ID_NET_NAME_ONBOARD</literal>.
+                                                                </para>
                                                         </listitem>
                                                 </varlistentry>
                                                 <varlistentry>
@@ -254,8 +254,8 @@
                                                         <listitem>
                                                                 <para>The name is set based on information given by
                                                                 the firmware for hot-plug devices, as exported by
-                                                                the udev property <literal>ID_NET_NAME_SLOT</literal>
-                                                                .</para>
+                                                                the udev property <literal>ID_NET_NAME_SLOT</literal>.
+                                                                </para>
                                                         </listitem>
                                                 </varlistentry>
                                                 <varlistentry>
@@ -329,7 +329,7 @@
                                                 <varlistentry>
                                                         <term><literal>magic</literal></term>
                                                         <listitem>
-                                                                <para>Wake on receipt of a magic packet
+                                                                <para>Wake on receipt of a magic packet.
                                                                 </para>
                                                         </listitem>
                                                 </varlistentry>
diff --git a/man/systemd.network.xml b/man/systemd.network.xml
index 48e33ac..c4e5055 100644
--- a/man/systemd.network.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.network.xml
@@ -272,8 +272,8 @@
                                         <term><varname>Broadcast=</varname></term>
                                         <listitem>
                                                 <para>The broadcast address, which must be in the format described in
-                                                <citerefentry><refentrytitle>inet_pton</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry>
-                                                . This key only applies to IPv4 addresses. If it is not given, it is
+                                                <citerefentry><refentrytitle>inet_pton</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry>.
+                                                This key only applies to IPv4 addresses. If it is not given, it is
                                                 derived from the <literal>Address</literal> key.</para>
                                         </listitem>
                                 </varlistentry>

commit d28315e4aff91560ed4c2fc9f876ec8bfc559f2d
Author: Jan Engelhardt <jengelh at inai.de>
Date:   Sat May 3 19:15:23 2014 +0200

    doc: use non-contracted forms in written documents

diff --git a/NEWS b/NEWS
index 0d7376c..5ca6c03 100644
--- a/NEWS
+++ b/NEWS
@@ -127,8 +127,8 @@ CHANGES WITH 212:
           timers configured this way will save to disk when they have
           been last triggered. This information is then used on next
           reboot to possible execute overdue timer events, that
-          couldn't take place because the system was powered off. This
-          enables simple anacron-like behaviour for timer units.
+          could not take place because the system was powered off.
+          This enables simple anacron-like behaviour for timer units.
 
         * systemctl's "list-timers" will now also list the time a
           timer unit was last triggered in addition to the next time
@@ -359,10 +359,10 @@ CHANGES WITH 210:
           anymore. Instead we now build libsystemd.so multiple times
           under these alternative names. This means that the footprint
           is drastically increased, but given that these are
-          transitional compatibility libraries this shouldn't matter
+          transitional compatibility libraries this should not matter
           much. This change has been made necessary to support the ARM
           platform for these compatibility libraries, as the ARM
-          toolchain isn't really at the same level as the toolchain
+          toolchain is not really at the same level as the toolchain
           for other architectures like x86 and does not support
           IFUNC. Please make sure to use --enable-compat-libs only
           during a transitional period!
@@ -617,7 +617,7 @@ CHANGES WITH 209:
           merged them into a single library, libsystemd.so, which
           provides all symbols. The reason for this is cyclic
           dependencies, as these libraries tend to use each other's
-          symbols. So far, we've managed to workaround that by linking
+          symbols. So far, we have managed to workaround that by linking
           a copy of a good part of our code into each of these
           libraries again and again, which, however, makes certain
           things hard to do, like sharing static variables. Also, it
@@ -861,13 +861,13 @@ CHANGES WITH 208:
 
         * A new tmpfiles.d(5) command "m" has been introduced which
           may be used to change the owner/group/access mode of a file
-          or directory if it exists, but do nothing if it doesn't.
+          or directory if it exists, but do nothing if it does not.
 
         * This release removes high-level support for the
           MemorySoftLimit= cgroup setting. The underlying kernel
           cgroup attribute memory.soft_limit= is currently badly
           designed and likely to be removed from the kernel API in its
-          current form, hence we shouldn't expose it for now.
+          current form, hence we should not expose it for now.
 
         * The memory.use_hierarchy cgroup attribute is now enabled for
           all cgroups systemd creates in the memory cgroup
@@ -950,7 +950,7 @@ CHANGES WITH 207:
 
         * InaccessibleDirectories= and ReadOnlyDirectories= now take
           paths that are optionally prefixed with "-" to indicate that
-          it should not be considered a failure if they don't exist.
+          it should not be considered a failure if they do not exist.
 
         * journalctl -o (and similar commands) now understands a new
           output mode "short-precise", it is similar to "short" but
@@ -1056,7 +1056,7 @@ CHANGES WITH 206:
           databases to pre-generate dead device nodes based on meta
           information contained in kernel modules, so that these would
           be auto-loaded on access rather then at boot. As this
-          doesn't really have much to do with the exposing actual
+          does not really have much to do with the exposing actual
           kernel devices to userspace this has always been slightly
           alien in the udev codebase. Following the new scheme kmod
           will now generate a runtime snippet for tmpfiles from the
@@ -1476,7 +1476,7 @@ CHANGES WITH 201:
 
         * 'systemd-analyze dot' gained the ability to filter for
           specific units via shell-style globs, to create smaller,
-          more useful graphs. I.e. it's now possible to create simple
+          more useful graphs. I.e. it is now possible to create simple
           graphs of all the dependencies between only target units, or
           of all units that Avahi has dependencies with.
 
@@ -1854,8 +1854,8 @@ CHANGES WITH 197:
           http://www.freedesktop.org/wiki/Software/systemd/PredictableNetworkInterfaceNames
 
         * Auke Kok's bootchart implementation has been added to the
-          systemd tree. It's an optional component that can graph the
-          boot in quite some detail. It's one of the best bootchart
+          systemd tree. It is an optional component that can graph the
+          boot in quite some detail. It is one of the best bootchart
           implementations around and minimal in its code and
           dependencies.
 
@@ -2056,7 +2056,7 @@ CHANGES WITH 196:
           PolicyKit-less systems. Quite frankly this should have been
           this way since day one. It is absolutely our intention to
           make systemd work fine on PolicyKit-less systems, and we
-          consider it a bug if something doesn't work as it should if
+          consider it a bug if something does not work as it should if
           PolicyKit is not around.
 
         * For embedded systems it is now possible to build udev and
@@ -2228,7 +2228,7 @@ CHANGES WITH 192:
         * The bash completion logic is now available for journalctl
           too.
 
-        * We don't mount the "cpuset" controller anymore together with
+        * We do not mount the "cpuset" controller anymore together with
           "cpu" and "cpuacct", as "cpuset" groups generally cannot be
           started if no parameters are assigned to it. "cpuset" hence
           broke code that assumed it it could create "cpu" groups and
@@ -2277,7 +2277,7 @@ CHANGES WITH 191:
 
 CHANGES WITH 190:
 
-        * Whenever a unit changes state we'll now log this to the
+        * Whenever a unit changes state we will now log this to the
           journal and show along the unit's own log output in
           "systemctl status".
 
@@ -2347,7 +2347,7 @@ CHANGES WITH 190:
         * There's now a new RPM macro definition for the system preset
           dir: %_presetdir.
 
-        * journald will now warn if it can't forward a message to the
+        * journald will now warn if it ca not forward a message to the
           syslog daemon because it's socket is full.
 
         * timedated will no longer write or process /etc/timezone,
@@ -2876,7 +2876,7 @@ CHANGES WITH 183:
 
         * systemctl will now warn you if .mount units generated from
           /etc/fstab are out of date due to changes in fstab that
-          haven't been read by systemd yet.
+          have not been read by systemd yet.
 
         * systemd is now suitable for usage in initrds. Dracut has
           already been updated to make use of this. With this in place
@@ -2939,7 +2939,7 @@ CHANGES WITH 183:
         * We now mount /tmp as tmpfs by default, but this can be
           masked and /etc/fstab can override it.
 
-        * Since udisks doesn't make use of /media anymore we are not
+        * Since udisks does not make use of /media anymore we are not
           mounting a tmpfs on it anymore.
 
         * journalctl gained a new --local switch to only interleave
@@ -2980,7 +2980,7 @@ CHANGES WITH 44:
           folks
 
         * We now refuse non-UTF8 strings used in various configuration
-          and unit files. This is done to ensure we don't pass invalid
+          and unit files. This is done to ensure we do not pass invalid
           data over D-Bus or expose it elsewhere.
 
         * Register Mimo USB Screens as suitable for automatic seat
@@ -3141,7 +3141,7 @@ CHANGES WITH 39:
           death, since fanotify() will not see accesses done by blkid,
           or fsck.
 
-        * Don't show kernel threads in systemd-cgls anymore, unless
+        * Do not show kernel threads in systemd-cgls anymore, unless
           requested with new -k switch.
 
         Contributions from: Dan Horák, Kay Sievers, Lennart
@@ -3213,7 +3213,7 @@ CHANGES WITH 38:
           --with-rootprefix= to follow the naming used by udev and
           kmod
 
-        * Unless specified otherwise we'll now install to /usr instead
+        * Unless specified otherwise we will now install to /usr instead
           of /usr/local by default.
 
         * Processes with '@' in argv[0][0] are now excluded from the
diff --git a/README b/README
index cecbcbf..795db89 100644
--- a/README
+++ b/README
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ REQUIREMENTS:
 
         Kernel Config Options:
           CONFIG_DEVTMPFS
-          CONFIG_CGROUPS (it's OK to disable all controllers)
+          CONFIG_CGROUPS (it is OK to disable all controllers)
           CONFIG_INOTIFY_USER
           CONFIG_SIGNALFD
           CONFIG_TIMERFD
diff --git a/TODO b/TODO
index eca917d..7fcb511 100644
--- a/TODO
+++ b/TODO
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ Features:
 
 * mount_cgroup_controllers(): symlinks need to get the label applied
 
-* For timer units: add some mechanisms so that timer units that trigger immediately on boot don't have the services they run added to the initial transaction and thus confuse Type=idle. Alternatively, split up the boot-up state into two, and make Type=idle only be affected by jobs for the default target, but ignore any further jobs
+* For timer units: add some mechanisms so that timer units that trigger immediately on boot do not have the services they run added to the initial transaction and thus confuse Type=idle. Alternatively, split up the boot-up state into two, and make Type=idle only be affected by jobs for the default target, but ignore any further jobs
 
 * Add RPM macros for registering/unregistering binfmt drop-ins
 
@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@ Features:
 
 * improve journalctl performance by loading journal files
   lazily. Encode just enough information in the file name, so that we
-  don't have to open it to know that it is not interesting for us, for
+  do not have to open it to know that it is not interesting for us, for
   the most common operations.
 
 * support transient mount units
@@ -177,7 +177,7 @@ Features:
 
 * btrfs raid assembly: some .device jobs stay stuck in the queue
 
-* make sure gdm doesn't use multi-user-x but the new default X configuration file, and then remove multi-user-x from systemd
+* make sure gdm does not use multi-user-x but the new default X configuration file, and then remove multi-user-x from systemd
 
 * man: the documentation of Restart= currently is very misleading and suggests the tools from ExecStartPre= might get restarted.
 
@@ -194,7 +194,7 @@ Features:
 
 * sd-bus:
   - make AddMatch calls on dbus1 transports async
-  - when kdbus doesn't take our message without memfds, try again with memfds
+  - when kdbus does not take our message without memfds, try again with memfds
   - systemd-bus-proxyd needs to enforce good old XML policy
   - port exit-on-idle logic to byebye ioctl
   - allow updating attach flags during runtime
@@ -251,7 +251,7 @@ Features:
   file.
 
 * seems that when we follow symlinks to units we prefer the symlink
-  destination path over /etc and /usr. We shouldn't do that. Instead
+  destination path over /etc and /usr. We should not do that. Instead
   /etc should always override /run+/usr and also any symlink
   destination.
 
@@ -277,7 +277,7 @@ Features:
 
 * journal-or-kmsg is currently broken? See reverted commit 4a01181e460686d8b4a543b1dfa7f77c9e3c5ab8.
 
-* remove any syslog support from log.c -- we probably can't do this before split-off udev is gone for good
+* remove any syslog support from log.c -- we probably cannot do this before split-off udev is gone for good
 
 * shutdown logging: store to EFI var, and store to USB stick?
 
@@ -333,7 +333,7 @@ Features:
   - journald: also get thread ID from client, plus thread name
   - journal: when waiting for journal additions in the client always sleep at least 1s or so, in order to minimize wakeups
   - add API to close/reopen/get fd for journal client fd in libsystemd-journal.
-  - fallback to /dev/log based logging in libsystemd-journal, if we can't log natively?
+  - fallback to /dev/log based logging in libsystemd-journal, if we cannot log natively?
   - declare the local journal protocol stable in the wiki interface chart
   - journal: reuse XZ context
   - sd-journal: speed up sd_journal_get_data() with transparent hash table in bg
@@ -369,7 +369,7 @@ Features:
   - journald: make sure ratelimit is actually really per-service with the new cgroup changes
   - change systemd-journal-flush into a service that stays around during
     boot, and causes the journal to be moved back to /run on shutdown,
-    so that we don't keep /var busy. This needs to happen synchronously,
+    so that we do not keep /var busy. This needs to happen synchronously,
     hence doing this via signals is not going to work.
 
 * document:
@@ -397,7 +397,7 @@ Features:
   - print nice message from systemctl --failed if there are no entries shown, and hook that into ExecStartPre of rescue.service/emergency.service
   - add new command to systemctl: "systemctl system-reexec" which reexecs as many daemons as virtually possible
   - systemctl enable: improve the success messages (i.e. more human readable, less shell-like)
-  - systemctl enable: fail if target to alias into doesn't exist? maybe show how many units are enabled afterwards?
+  - systemctl enable: fail if target to alias into does not exist? maybe show how many units are enabled afterwards?
   - systemctl: "Journal has been rotated since unit was started." message is misleading
   - support "systemctl stop foobar at .service" to stop all units matching a certain template
   - Something is wrong with symlink handling of "autovt at .service" in "systemctl list-unit-files"
@@ -424,7 +424,7 @@ Features:
     o DST changes
   - Support 2012-02~4 as syntax for specifying the fourth to last day of the month.
   - calendarspec: support value ranges with ".." notation. Example: 2013-4..8-1
-  - when parsing calendar timestamps support the UTC timezone (even if we won't support arbitrary timezone specs, support UTC itself certainly makes sense), also support syntaxes such as +0200
+  - when parsing calendar timestamps support the UTC timezone (even if we will not support arbitrary timezone specs, support UTC itself certainly makes sense), also support syntaxes such as +0200
   - Modulate timer frequency based on battery state
 
 * update the kernel's TZ (sys_tz) when DST changes
@@ -448,7 +448,7 @@ Features:
 * If we show an error about a unit (such as not showing up) and it has no Description string, then show a description string generated form the reverse of unit_name_mangle().
 
 * fedup: add --unit to systemctl switch-root somehow
-* fedup: don't delete initrd on switch-root
+* fedup: do not delete initrd on switch-root
 * fedup: generator
 
 * timedated: refuse time changes when NTP is on
@@ -469,7 +469,7 @@ Features:
 
 * hostnamed: before returning information from /etc/machine-info.conf check the modification data and reread. Similar for localed, ...
 
-* currently x-systemd.timeout is lost in the initrd, since crypttab is copied into dracut, but fstab isn't
+* currently x-systemd.timeout is lost in the initrd, since crypttab is copied into dracut, but fstab is not
 
 * nspawn:
   - nspawn: --read-only is not applied recursively to submounts
@@ -515,9 +515,9 @@ Features:
 
 * drop PID 1 reloading, only do reexecing (difficult: Reload()
   currently is properly synchronous, Reexec() is weird, because we
-  can't delay the response properly until we are back, so instead of
+  cannot delay the response properly until we are back, so instead of
   being properly synchronous we just keep open the fd and close it
-  when done. That means clients don't get a successful method reply,
+  when done. That means clients do not get a successful method reply,
   but much rather a disconnect on success.
 
 * properly handle loop back mounts via fstab, especially regards to fsck/passno
@@ -531,7 +531,7 @@ Features:
 * rename "userspace" to "core-os"
 
 * load-fragment: when loading a unit file via a chain of symlinks
-  verify that it isn't masked via any of the names traversed.
+  verify that it is not masked via any of the names traversed.
 
 * introduce Type=pid-file
 
@@ -586,7 +586,7 @@ Features:
   - check systemd-tmpfiles for selinux context hookup for mknod(), symlink() and similar
   - apply "x" on "D" too (see patch from William Douglas)
 
-* for services: don't set $HOME in services unless requested
+* for services: do not set $HOME in services unless requested
 
 * hide PAM options in fragment parser when compile time disabled
 
@@ -727,7 +727,7 @@ External:
 
 * drop accountsservice's StandardOutput=syslog and Type=dbus fields
 
-* dbus upstream still refers to dbus.target and shouldn't
+* dbus upstream still refers to dbus.target and should not
 
 * dbus: in fedora, make /var/lib/dbus/machine-id a symlink to /etc/machine-id
 
@@ -755,7 +755,7 @@ Regularly:
 
 * pahole
 
-* set_put(), hashmap_put() return values check. i.e. == 0 doesn't free()!
+* set_put(), hashmap_put() return values check. i.e. == 0 does not free()!
 
 * use secure_getenv() instead of getenv() where appropriate
 
diff --git a/man/sd_bus_path_encode.xml b/man/sd_bus_path_encode.xml
index 5c166d0..2cc720f 100644
--- a/man/sd_bus_path_encode.xml
+++ b/man/sd_bus_path_encode.xml
@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
     returns positive or 0, and a valid bus path in the return
     argument. On success, <function>sd_bus_path_decode()</function>
     returns a positive value if the prefixed matched, or 0 if it
-    didn't. If the prefix matched the external identifier is returned
+    did not. If the prefix matched the external identifier is returned
     in the return parameter. If it did not match NULL is returned in
     the return parameter. On failure, a negative errno-style error
     number is returned by either function. The returned strings must
diff --git a/man/systemd.network.xml b/man/systemd.network.xml
index f49de17..48e33ac 100644
--- a/man/systemd.network.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.network.xml
@@ -194,7 +194,7 @@
                                                 <para>A boolean. When true, enables IPv4 link-local support.
                                                 If <literal>DHCP=</literal> is also true, acquiring DHCP address
                                                 will deprecate previously acquired IPv4 link-local address or
-                                                stop acquiring process if there hasn't been one acquired before.
+                                                stop acquiring process if one has not been acquired before.
                                                 </para>
                                         </listitem>
                                 </varlistentry>



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