[systemd-commits] 2 commits - man/pam_systemd.xml

[Lennart Poettering]

 man/pam_systemd.xml |   42 +++++++++++++++++++++++-------------------
 1 file changed, 23 insertions(+), 19 deletions(-)

New commits:
commit 4a9dfff9bd981a0cfbeab97b6f3a2ee0e13b719c
Author: Lennart Poettering <lennart at poettering.net>
Date:   Fri Oct 24 12:07:05 2014 +0200

    man: add a link to the XDG basedir spec from the pam_sytemd man page

diff --git a/man/pam_systemd.xml b/man/pam_systemd.xml
index f81a407..47f7439 100644
--- a/man/pam_systemd.xml
+++ b/man/pam_systemd.xml
@@ -213,17 +213,21 @@
                                 applications should not rely on this
                                 behavior and must be able to deal with
                                 stale files. To store session-private
-                                data in this directory, the user should
-                                include the value of <varname>$XDG_SESSION_ID</varname>
-                                in the filename. This directory shall
-                                be used for runtime file system
-                                objects such as <constant>AF_UNIX</constant> sockets,
-                                FIFOs, PID files and similar. It is
-                                guaranteed that this directory is
-                                local and offers the greatest possible
-                                file system feature set the
-                                operating system
-                                provides.</para></listitem>
+                                data in this directory, the user
+                                should include the value of
+                                <varname>$XDG_SESSION_ID</varname> in
+                                the filename. This directory shall be
+                                used for runtime file system objects
+                                such as <constant>AF_UNIX</constant>
+                                sockets, FIFOs, PID files and
+                                similar. It is guaranteed that this
+                                directory is local and offers the
+                                greatest possible file system feature
+                                set the operating system provides. For
+                                further details see the <ulink
+                                url="http://standards.freedesktop.org/basedir-spec/basedir-spec-latest.html">XDG
+                                Base Directory
+                                Specification</ulink>.</para></listitem>
                         </varlistentry>
 
                 </variablelist>

commit c1405e4f313768519d66f49e0ffcbe964409d150
Author: Lennart Poettering <lennart at poettering.net>
Date:   Fri Oct 24 12:02:44 2014 +0200

    man: avoid gendered singular pronouns
    
    Using "their" as pronoun in these places is confusing since it is more
    associated with plural rather than singular, and the sentence already
    contains a plural. The word "her/his" apparently offends some people,
    hence let's avoid the problem altogether and just name the noun again.

diff --git a/man/pam_systemd.xml b/man/pam_systemd.xml
index 40709f7..f81a407 100644
--- a/man/pam_systemd.xml
+++ b/man/pam_systemd.xml
@@ -96,11 +96,11 @@
                 <orderedlist>
                         <listitem><para>If enabled in
                         <citerefentry><refentrytitle>logind.conf</refentrytitle>
-                        <manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>,
-                        all processes of the session are terminated. If
-                        the last concurrent session of a user ends, his
-                        user systemd instance will be terminated too,
-                        and so will the user's slice
+                        <manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>, all
+                        processes of the session are terminated. If
+                        the last concurrent session of a user ends,
+                        ther user's systemd instance will be
+                        terminated too, and so will the user's slice
                         unit.</para></listitem>
 
                         <listitem><para>If the last concurrent session
@@ -202,9 +202,9 @@
                                 to the user login time on the
                                 machine. It is automatically created
                                 the first time a user logs in and
-                                removed on his final logout. If a user
-                                logs in twice at the same time, both
-                                sessions will see the same
+                                removed on the user's final logout. If
+                                a user logs in twice at the same time,
+                                both sessions will see the same
                                 <varname>$XDG_RUNTIME_DIR</varname>
                                 and the same contents. If a user logs
                                 in once, then logs out again, and logs