[systemd-devel] [PATCH] man: minor edits to daemon, sd_listen_fds, sd_notify, systemctl, systemd.exec, systemd, and systemd.timer pages
Conrad Meyer
cemeyer at cs.washington.edu
Tue Jul 6 18:24:38 PDT 2010
Just some minor grammar fixes.
---
man/daemon.xml | 10 +++++-----
man/sd_listen_fds.xml | 4 ++--
man/sd_notify.xml | 2 +-
man/systemctl.xml | 2 +-
man/systemd.exec.xml | 6 +++---
man/systemd.timer.xml | 4 ++--
man/systemd.xml | 2 +-
7 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)
diff --git a/man/daemon.xml b/man/daemon.xml
index 8e9e939..dfee390 100644
--- a/man/daemon.xml
+++ b/man/daemon.xml
@@ -384,7 +384,7 @@
communication channels are established already, and no
request is lost because client requests will be queued
by the bus system (in case of D-Bus) or the kernel (in
- case of sockets), until the activation
+ case of sockets), until the activation is
completed.</para>
<refsect2>
@@ -726,7 +726,7 @@
install their systemd unit files in the
directory returned by <command>pkg-config
systemd
- --variable=systemdsystemnunitdir</command>
+ --variable=systemdsystemunitdir</command>
(for system services),
resp. <command>pkg-config systemd
--variable=systemdsessionunitdir</command>
@@ -809,8 +809,8 @@ fi</programlisting>
<para>Since new-style init systems such as systemd are
compatible with traditional SysV init systems it is
not strictly necessary to port existing daemons to the
- new style. However doing this offers additional
- functionality to the daemons as well as it simplifies
+ new style. However doing so offers additional
+ functionality to the daemons as well as simplifying
integration into new-style init systems.</para>
<para>To port an existing SysV compatible daemon the
@@ -849,7 +849,7 @@ fi</programlisting>
left-over file descriptors are passed to
executed processes, it might be a good choice
to simply skip the closing of all remaining
- open file descriptors if file descriptors are
+ open file descriptors if sockets are
passed.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>Write and install a systemd
diff --git a/man/sd_listen_fds.xml b/man/sd_listen_fds.xml
index 06403ec..6fb8d27 100644
--- a/man/sd_listen_fds.xml
+++ b/man/sd_listen_fds.xml
@@ -109,8 +109,8 @@
<para>On failure, this call returns a negative
errno-style error code. If
<varname>$LISTEN_FDS</varname>/<varname>$LISTEN_PID</varname>
- was not set or not correctly set for this daemon and
- hence no file descriptors received, 0 is
+ was not set or was not correctly set for this daemon and
+ hence no file descriptors were received, 0 is
returned. Otherwise the number of file descriptors
passed is returned. The application may find them
starting with file descriptor SD_LISTEN_FDS_START,
diff --git a/man/sd_notify.xml b/man/sd_notify.xml
index 80856a2..7c1d982 100644
--- a/man/sd_notify.xml
+++ b/man/sd_notify.xml
@@ -252,7 +252,7 @@
<title>Start-up Notification</title>
<para>When a daemon finished starting up, it
- might issue the following call call to notify
+ might issue the following call to notify
the init system:</para>
<programlisting>sd_notify(0, "READY=1");</programlisting>
diff --git a/man/systemctl.xml b/man/systemctl.xml
index c0b8d79..a7065f9 100644
--- a/man/systemctl.xml
+++ b/man/systemctl.xml
@@ -381,7 +381,7 @@
unit files and recreate the entire
dependency tree. While the daemon is
reloaded, all sockets systemd listens
- on on behalf of user configuration, will
+ on on behalf of user configuration will
stay accessible.</para> <para>This
command should not be confused with
the <command>load</command> or
diff --git a/man/systemd.exec.xml b/man/systemd.exec.xml
index 6502d87..a716f7d 100644
--- a/man/systemd.exec.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.exec.xml
@@ -374,13 +374,13 @@
<option>inherit</option>.</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>
<varlistentry>
- <term><varname>StandardOutput=</varname></term>
+ <term><varname>StandardError=</varname></term>
<listitem><para>Controls where file
descriptor 2 (STDERR) of the executed
processes is connected to. The
available options are identical to
those of
- <varname>StandardError=</varname>,
+ <varname>StandardOutput=</varname>,
whith one exception: if set to
<option>inherit</option> the file
descriptor used for standard output is
@@ -617,7 +617,7 @@
<listitem><para>Controls the control
groups the executed processes shall be
- made member of. Takes a
+ made members of. Takes a
space-seperated list of cgroup
identifiers. A cgroup identifier has a
format like
diff --git a/man/systemd.timer.xml b/man/systemd.timer.xml
index 557a45e..b34aa3f 100644
--- a/man/systemd.timer.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.timer.xml
@@ -170,10 +170,10 @@
specified, this value defaults to a
service that has the same name as the
timer unit, except for the
- suffix. (See above.) It is recommended,
+ suffix. (See above.) It is recommended
that the unit name that is activated
and the unit name of the timer unit
- are named identical, except for the
+ are named identically, except for the
suffix.</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>
</variablelist>
diff --git a/man/systemd.xml b/man/systemd.xml
index b4a7e3e..2d6de30 100644
--- a/man/systemd.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.xml
@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@
<listitem><para>Extract D-Bus
interface introspection data. This is
- mostly useful at build at install time
+ mostly useful at install time
to generate data suitable for the
D-Bus interfaces
repository. Optionally the interface
--
1.7.1
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