[systemd-devel] Some ambiguities in man pages

[Ozan Çağlayan]

Perşembe 08 Temmuz 2010 günü (saat 22:55:38) Lennart Poettering şunları 
yazmıştı:
> On Thu, 08.07.10 21:07, Ozan Çağlayan (ozan at pardus.org.tr) wrote:
> > Hi,
> > 
> > I wanted to note some ambiguous expressions in man pages in this thread
> > in order for you to refactor/fix them. Here's the first one:
> > 
> > systemd.unit.xml:156:
> >   "If this applies a special way to escape the path name is used, so that
> >   it is usable as part of a file name."
> 
> I have now replace the "it" by "the result". Does that fix the ambiguity
> you found?

I think a comma after applies is needed because I was reading this like
"if this applies a special way to escape the path" but now I've figured out 
that it's possibly,

"if this applies,, a special way to escape the path name is used so that the 
result is usable as part of a file name."

right?

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