[systemd-devel] [PATCH] man/sd-id128: Fix typos, grammar and wording

[Paul Menzel]

Date: Sat, 7 Jul 2012 13:03:27 +0200

• 2 was replaced by »two« in one place to avoid some ambiguity.
---
Please keep in mind, that I am no native English speaker.

 man/sd-id128.xml |   10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/man/sd-id128.xml b/man/sd-id128.xml
index cbc130d..db664f8 100644
--- a/man/sd-id128.xml
+++ b/man/sd-id128.xml
@@ -80,8 +80,8 @@
                 <para>See
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>sd_id128_to_string</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry> and
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>sd_id128_randomize</refentrytitle><manvolnum>3</manvolnum></citerefentry>
-                for more information about the functions
-                implemented.</para>
+                for more information about the implemented
+                functions.</para>
 
                 <para>A 128 bit ID is implemented as the following
                 union type:</para>
@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@
 } sd_id128_t;</programlisting>
 
                 <para>This union type allows accessing the 128 bit ID
-                as 16 separate bytes or 2 64 bit words. It is generally
+                as 16 separate bytes or two 64 bit words. It is generally
                 safer to access the ID components by their 8 bit array
                 to avoid endianess issues. This union is intended to
                 be passed call-by-value (as opposed to
@@ -137,13 +137,13 @@
                 <para>Note that new, randomized IDs may be generated
                 with
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>journalctl</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>'s
-                <literal>--new-id</literal> command.</para>
+                <literal>--new-id</literal> option.</para>
         </refsect1>
 
         <refsect1>
                 <title>Notes</title>
 
-                <para>These APIs are implemented as shared library,
+                <para>These APIs are implemented as a shared library,
                 which can be compiled and linked to with the
                 <literal>libsystemd-id128</literal>
                 <citerefentry><refentrytitle>pkg-config</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>
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