[systemd-devel] [PATCH 2/2] man: Small grammar fix

[Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek]

On Tue, Jul 23, 2013 at 09:41:45AM -0500, William Giokas wrote:
> '... or ... or ...' should be '..., ... or ...'
> ---
>  man/systemctl.xml | 4 ++--
>  1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/man/systemctl.xml b/man/systemctl.xml
> index ee13a70..0a90202 100644
> --- a/man/systemctl.xml
> +++ b/man/systemctl.xml
> @@ -111,8 +111,8 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
>          <term><option>--state=</option></term>
>  
>          <listitem>
> -        <para>The argument should be a comma-separated list of unit LOAD
> -        or SUB or ACTIVE states. When listing units, show only those
> +        <para>The argument should be a comma-separated list of unit LOAD,
> +        SUB or ACTIVE states. When listing units, show only those
>          with specified LOAD or SUB or ACTIVE state.</para>
>          </listitem>
>        </varlistentry>
Hm, this patch series slipped through the cracks completely. I pushed my own
patch based on this patch, because the whole paragraph was awkward and we use
the "oxford comma", ie. word, word, and word.

I think the rest of the series has been merged after you resent it rebased.
I not, please holler.

Zbyszek