[systemd-devel] [PATCH] man: wording and grammar update
Jan Engelhardt
jengelh at inai.de
Sat Jul 13 01:51:35 PDT 2013
---
man/systemd.cgroup.xml | 30 +++++++++++++++---------------
man/systemd.exec.xml | 2 +-
man/systemd.scope.xml | 2 +-
man/systemd.socket.xml | 2 +-
4 files changed, 18 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)
diff --git a/man/systemd.cgroup.xml b/man/systemd.cgroup.xml
index 504c968..e31faf5 100644
--- a/man/systemd.cgroup.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.cgroup.xml
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
and
<citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd.swap</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>
for more information on the specific unit configuration files. The
- execution specific configuration options are configured in the
+ execution-specific configuration options are configured in the
[Slice], [Scope], [Service], [Socket], [Mount], or [Swap]
sections, depending on the unit type.</para>
</refsect1>
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
<term><varname>CPUAccounting=</varname></term>
<listitem>
- <para>Turn on the CPU usage accounting for this
+ <para>Turn on CPU usage accounting for this
unit.</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
@@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
<term><varname>BlockIOAccounting=</varname></term>
<listitem>
- <para>Turn on the Block IO bandwidth accounting
+ <para>Turn on Block IO bandwidth accounting
for this unit.</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
@@ -112,7 +112,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
<term><varname>MemoryAccounting=</varname></term>
<listitem>
- <para>Turn on the process and kernel memory
+ <para>Turn on process and kernel memory
accounting for this unit.</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
the processes executed. Takes an integer value. This
controls the <literal>cpu.shares</literal> control group
attribute, which defaults to 1024. For details about this
- control group attribute see <ulink
+ control group attribute, see <ulink
url="http://www.kernel.org/doc/Documentation/scheduler/sched-design-CFS.txt">sched-design-CFS.txt</ulink>.</para>
<para>Implies <literal>CPUAccounting=true</literal>.</para>
@@ -145,12 +145,12 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
detects memory contention, memory reclaim will be performed
until the memory usage is within the "soft" limit. Takes a
memory size in bytes. If the value is suffixed with K, M, G
- or T the specified memory size is parsed as Kilobytes,
+ or T, the specified memory size is parsed as Kilobytes,
Megabytes, Gigabytes, or Terabytes (with the base 1024),
respectively. This controls the
<literal>memory.limit_in_bytes</literal> and
<literal>memory.soft_limit_in_bytes</literal> control group
- attributes. For details about these control group attributes
+ attributes. For details about these control group attributes,
see <ulink
url="http://www.kernel.org/doc/Documentation/cgroups/memory.txt">memory.txt</ulink>.</para>
@@ -170,7 +170,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
<literal>blkio.weight</literal>
control group attribute, which
defaults to 1000. For details about
- this control group attribute see
+ this control group attribute, see
<ulink
url="http://www.kernel.org/doc/Documentation/cgroups/blkio-controller.txt">blkio-controller.txt</ulink>.</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>
@@ -190,7 +190,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
<literal>blkio.weight_device</literal> control group
attribute, which defaults to 1000. Use this option multiple
times to set weights for multiple devices. For details about
- this control group attribute see <ulink
+ this control group attribute, see <ulink
url="http://www.kernel.org/doc/Documentation/cgroups/blkio-controller.txt">blkio-controller.txt</ulink>.</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
@@ -206,7 +206,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
specify the device specific bandwidth. The file path may be
a path to a block device node, or as any other file in which
case the backing block device of the file system of the file
- is used. If the bandwidth is suffixed with K, M, G, or T
+ is used. If the bandwidth is suffixed with K, M, G, or T,
the specified bandwidth is parsed as Kilobytes, Megabytes,
Gigabytes, or Terabytes, respectively (Example:
"/dev/disk/by-path/pci-0000:00:1f.2-scsi-0:0:0:0 5M"). This
@@ -214,7 +214,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
<literal>blkio.write_bps_device</literal> control group
attributes. Use this option multiple times to set bandwidth
limits for multiple devices. For details about these control
- group attributes see
+ group attributes, see
<ulink url="http://www.kernel.org/doc/Documentation/cgroups/blkio-controller.txt">blkio-controller.txt</ulink>.
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -230,11 +230,11 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
followed by a combination of <constant>r</constant>,
<constant>w</constant>, <constant>m</constant> to control
<emphasis>r</emphasis>eading, <emphasis>w</emphasis>riting,
- or creating of the specific device node by the unit
+ or creation of the specific device node by the unit
(<emphasis>m</emphasis>knod), respectively. This controls
the <literal>devices.allow</literal> and
<literal>devices.deny</literal> control group
- attributes. For details about these control group attributes
+ attributes. For details about these control group attributes,
see <ulink
url="http://www.kernel.org/doc/Documentation/cgroups/devices.txt">devices.txt</ulink>.</para>
</listitem>
@@ -259,7 +259,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
<varlistentry>
<term><option>closed</option></term>
<listitem>
- <para>in addition allows access to standard pseudo
+ <para>in addition, allows access to standard pseudo
devices including
<filename>/dev/null</filename>,
<filename>/dev/zero</filename>,
@@ -274,7 +274,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
<term><option>auto</option></term>
<listitem>
<para>
- in addition allows access to all devices if no
+ in addition, allows access to all devices if no
explicit <varname>DeviceAllow=</varname> is present.
This is the default.
</para>
diff --git a/man/systemd.exec.xml b/man/systemd.exec.xml
index d299fc0..c995834 100644
--- a/man/systemd.exec.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.exec.xml
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@
<title>Description</title>
<para>Unit configuration files for services, sockets,
- mount points, and swap devices share a subset of
+ mount points and swap devices share a subset of
configuration options which define the execution
environment of spawned processes.</para>
diff --git a/man/systemd.scope.xml b/man/systemd.scope.xml
index 31f2d6f..6cd8c88 100644
--- a/man/systemd.scope.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.scope.xml
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
<para>A unit configuration file whose name ends in
<literal>.scope</literal> encodes information about a unit created
- by systemd to encapsulate processes launched not by systemd
+ by systemd to encapsulate processes not launched by systemd
itself. This management is performed by creating a node in the
control group tree. Processes are moved into the scope by means
of the DBus API.
diff --git a/man/systemd.socket.xml b/man/systemd.socket.xml
index fad5c2b..852010b 100644
--- a/man/systemd.socket.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.socket.xml
@@ -510,7 +510,7 @@
<varlistentry>
<term><varname>ReusePort=</varname></term>
<listitem><para>Takes a boolean
- value. If true allows multiple bind()s
+ value. If true, allows multiple bind()s
to this TCP or UDP port. This
controls the SO_REUSEPORT socket
option. See
--
1.8.2
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