[systemd-devel] [PATCH 2/2] man: wording and grammar updates

[Jan Engelhardt]

This is a recurring submission and includes corrections to various
issue spotted: comma setting, missing words/preposition choice.

Important this time: /lib was changed to /usr/lib, since that is what
most distros seem to use for their systemd/udev file location.
---
 man/sd_is_fifo.xml               |  2 +-
 man/systemd-networkd.service.xml |  8 ++++----
 man/udev.xml                     | 12 ++++++------
 3 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)

diff --git a/man/sd_is_fifo.xml b/man/sd_is_fifo.xml
index 4d9cd79..ec109a9 100644
--- a/man/sd_is_fifo.xml
+++ b/man/sd_is_fifo.xml
@@ -165,7 +165,7 @@
                 called to check whether the specified file descriptor
                 refers to a special file. If the
                 <parameter>path</parameter> parameter is not
-                <constant>NULL</constant>, it is checked whether file
+                <constant>NULL</constant>, it is checked whether the file
                 descriptor is bound to the specified file
                 name. Special files in this context are character
                 device nodes and files in <filename>/proc</filename>
diff --git a/man/systemd-networkd.service.xml b/man/systemd-networkd.service.xml
index 209e3be..db23978 100644
--- a/man/systemd-networkd.service.xml
+++ b/man/systemd-networkd.service.xml
@@ -66,8 +66,8 @@
                 <para>Network configurations applied before networkd is started
                 are not removed, and configuration applied by networkd are not
                 removed when networkd exits. This ensures restarting networkd
-                does not cut the network connection, and in particular that it
-                is safe to transition between the initrd and the real root,
+                does not cut the network connection, and, in particular, that
+                it is safe to transition between the initrd and the real root,
                 and back.</para>
         </refsect1>
 
@@ -82,10 +82,10 @@
                 identical filenames replace each other. Files in
                 <filename>/etc</filename> have the highest priority, files in
                 <filename>/run</filename> take precedence over files with the same
-                name in <filename>/lib</filename>. This can be used to override a
+                name in <filename>/usr/lib</filename>. This can be used to override a
                 system-supplied network file with a local file if needed; a symlink in
                 <filename>/etc</filename> with the same name as a network file in
-                <filename>/lib</filename>, pointing to <filename>/dev/null</filename>,
+                <filename>/usr/lib</filename>, pointing to <filename>/dev/null</filename>,
                 disables the network file entirely. Network files must have the extension
                 <filename>.network</filename>; other extensions are ignored.</para>
 
diff --git a/man/udev.xml b/man/udev.xml
index d0998ce..56d650b 100644
--- a/man/udev.xml
+++ b/man/udev.xml
@@ -63,10 +63,10 @@
       regardless of the directories in which they live. However, files with
       identical filenames replace each other. Files in <filename>/etc</filename>
       have the highest priority, files in <filename>/run</filename> take precedence
-      over files with the same name in <filename>/lib</filename>. This can be
+      over files with the same name in <filename>/usr/lib</filename>. This can be
       used to override a system-supplied rules file with a local file if needed;
       a symlink in <filename>/etc</filename> with the same name as a rules file in
-      <filename>/lib</filename>, pointing to <filename>/dev/null</filename>,
+      <filename>/usr/lib</filename>, pointing to <filename>/dev/null</filename>,
       disables the rules file entirely. Rule files must have the extension
       <filename>.rules</filename>; other extensions are ignored.</para>
 
@@ -715,10 +715,10 @@
       regardless of the directories in which they live. However, files with
       identical filenames replace each other. Files in <filename>/etc</filename>
       have the highest priority, files in <filename>/run</filename> take precedence
-      over files with the same name in <filename>/lib</filename>. This can be
+      over files with the same name in <filename>/usr/lib</filename>. This can be
       used to override a system-supplied hwdb file with a local file if needed;
       a symlink in <filename>/etc</filename> with the same name as a hwdb file in
-      <filename>/lib</filename>, pointing to <filename>/dev/null</filename>,
+      <filename>/usr/lib</filename>, pointing to <filename>/dev/null</filename>,
       disables the hwdb file entirely. hwdb files must have the extension
       <filename>.hwdb</filename>; other extensions are ignored.</para>
 
@@ -754,10 +754,10 @@
       regardless of the directories in which they live. However, files with
       identical filenames replace each other. Files in <filename>/etc</filename>
       have the highest priority, files in <filename>/run</filename> take precedence
-      over files with the same name in <filename>/lib</filename>. This can be
+      over files with the same name in <filename>/usr/lib</filename>. This can be
       used to override a system-supplied link file with a local file if needed;
       a symlink in <filename>/etc</filename> with the same name as a link file in
-      <filename>/lib</filename>, pointing to <filename>/dev/null</filename>,
+      <filename>/usr/lib</filename>, pointing to <filename>/dev/null</filename>,
       disables the link file entirely.</para>
 
       <para>The link file contains a <literal>[Match]</literal> section, which
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