[systemd-devel] [PATCH] man: improve wording of systemctl's --after/--before

[Jason St. John]

Commit 4a77ca7 was an attempt at fixing the wording of --after and --before,
but the new wording was unclear.

Split the combined --after/--before section into a separate section for
each, explicitly state what each option does, and add information about
how these lists are generated.

Reported-by: Andrey Borzenkov <arvidjaar at gmail.com>
Reported-by: Lennart Poettering <lennart at poettering.net>
---
Patch that resulted in commit 4a77ca7 was posted here:
http://lists.freedesktop.org/archives/systemd-devel/2014-February/017277.html

Lennart's response:
http://lists.freedesktop.org/archives/systemd-devel/2014-March/017778.html

I put a "Reported-by" line for Andrey because he was the one that originally
brought this to the ML's attention, and I added one for Lennart because his
note about the whole section needing rewording is what directed my attention
to this. If "Reported-by" lines are not to be used, feel free to strip them
when applying.


 man/systemctl.xml | 17 ++++++++++++++---
 1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/man/systemctl.xml b/man/systemctl.xml
index ee6ab8f..a24b7c1 100644
--- a/man/systemctl.xml
+++ b/man/systemctl.xml
@@ -145,12 +145,23 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
 
       <varlistentry>
         <term><option>--after</option></term>
+
+        <listitem>
+          <para>With <command>list-dependencies</command>, show the
+          units that are ordered before the specified unit. In other
+          words, list the units that are in the <varname>After=</varname>
+          directive of the specified unit.</para>
+        </listitem>
+      </varlistentry>
+
+      <varlistentry>
         <term><option>--before</option></term>
 
         <listitem>
-          <para>Show after (before) which units the specified unit is started
-          with <command>list-dependencies</command>.
-          </para>
+          <para>With <command>list-dependencies</command>, show the
+          units that are ordered after the specified unit. In other
+          words, list the units that are in the <varname>Before=</varname>
+          directive of the specified unit.</para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
 
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