[systemd-devel] [systemd-commits] man/pam_systemd.xml

[Chris Bell]

On Fri, Oct 24, 2014 at 4:17 AM, Daniel Mack <daniel at zonque.org> wrote:
> Could you please send a patch that does that change?

Here you go!

>From 517599692ed194156e8277e310270f4407d0d124 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Chris Bell <cwbell at mail.usf.edu>
Date: Fri, 24 Oct 2014 05:22:36 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] sidestepped gender-neutral debate

---
 man/pam_systemd.xml | 12 ++++++------
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/man/pam_systemd.xml b/man/pam_systemd.xml
index 40709f7..2090e73 100644
--- a/man/pam_systemd.xml
+++ b/man/pam_systemd.xml
@@ -98,10 +98,9 @@

<citerefentry><refentrytitle>logind.conf</refentrytitle>
                         <manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>,
                         all processes of the session are terminated. If
-                        the last concurrent session of a user ends, his
-                        user systemd instance will be terminated too,
-                        and so will the user's slice
-                        unit.</para></listitem>
+                        the last concurrent session of a user ends,
+                        that user's systemd instance and slice unit
+                        will both be terminated.</para></listitem>

                         <listitem><para>If the last concurrent session
                         of a user ends, the
@@ -201,8 +200,9 @@
                                 user-writable directory that is bound
                                 to the user login time on the
                                 machine. It is automatically created
-                                the first time a user logs in and
-                                removed on his final logout. If a user
+                                the first time a user logs in and is
+                                removed when the user logs out of
+                                the last active session. If a user
                                 logs in twice at the same time, both
                                 sessions will see the same
                                 <varname>$XDG_RUNTIME_DIR</varname>
--

Chris Bell

Ph.D. Student
University of South Florida
College of Engineering
Department of Computer Science and Engineering