[Wayland-bugs] [Bug 65903] New: Grammatical tweaks for FAQ

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https://bugs.freedesktop.org/show_bug.cgi?id=65903

          Priority: medium
            Bug ID: 65903
          Assignee: wayland-bugs at lists.freedesktop.org
           Summary: Grammatical tweaks for FAQ
          Severity: trivial
    Classification: Unclassified
                OS: All
          Reporter: brett at python.org
          Hardware: Other
            Status: NEW
           Version: unspecified
         Component: wayland
           Product: Wayland

"One of the reasons this project is feasible at all, is that Wayland" -> comma
is not needed as there is no pause when you read that sentence. The word "is"
acts as the connector between the two parts of the sentence already.

"When the client is, it informs" -> I think there is an "done" missing from
that sentence, e.g. "When the client is done it informs"

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