[PATCH 04/21] docs: Improve the 'Connect time' section

[Jason Ekstrand]

Looks Good!
--Jason Ekstrand

On Sat, Mar 30, 2013 at 12:11 AM,  <matthias.clasen at gmail.com> wrote:
> From: Matthias Clasen <mclasen at redhat.com>
>
> Turn the bullet-point list into complete sentences.
> ---
>  doc/Wayland/en_US/Protocol.xml | 19 ++++---------------
>  1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/doc/Wayland/en_US/Protocol.xml b/doc/Wayland/en_US/Protocol.xml
> index cab68a8..955b054 100644
> --- a/doc/Wayland/en_US/Protocol.xml
> +++ b/doc/Wayland/en_US/Protocol.xml
> @@ -73,7 +73,7 @@
>        <itemizedlist>
>         <listitem>
>           <para>
> -           The first word is the sender's object id (32-bit).
> +           The first word is the sender's object ID (32-bit).
>           </para>
>         </listitem>
>         <listitem>
> @@ -167,20 +167,9 @@
>    <section id="sect-Protocol-Connect-Time">
>      <title>Connect Time</title>
>      <para>
> -      <itemizedlist>
> -       <listitem>
> -         <para>
> -           no fixed format connect block, the server emits a bunch of
> -           events at connect time
> -         </para>
> -       </listitem>
> -       <listitem>
> -         <para>
> -           presence events for global objects: output, compositor, input
> -           devices
> -         </para>
> -       </listitem>
> -      </itemizedlist>
> +      There is no fixed connection setup information, the server emits
> +      multiple events at connect time, to indicate the presence and
> +      properties of global objects: outputs, compositor, input devices.
>      </para>
>    </section>
>    <section id="sect-Protocol-Security-and-Authentication">
> --
> 1.8.1.4
>
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