[systemd-devel] [systemd-commits] man/pam_systemd.xml

[Lennart Poettering]

On Thu, 23.10.14 10:19, Daniel Mack (zonque at kemper.freedesktop.org) wrote:

>                  <para>On logout, this module ensures the following:</para>
>  
>                  <orderedlist>
> -                        <listitem><para>If this is enabled, all
> -                        processes of the session are terminated. If
> -                        the last concurrent session of a user ends, his
> +                        <listitem><para>If enabled in
> +                        <citerefentry><refentrytitle>logind.conf</refentrytitle>
> +                        <manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>,
> +                        all processes of the session are terminated. If
> +                        the last concurrent session of a user ends, their

hmm, why "their"? THat's wrong. It's the user's instance, hence must
be singular. Or is this about his vs. her? If so I find "their" quite
confusing, and if so, at least "his/her" would be better.

>                          user systemd instance will be terminated too,
>                          and so will the user's slice
>                          unit.</para></listitem>
> @@ -200,7 +202,7 @@
>                                  to the user login time on the
>                                  machine. It is automatically created
>                                  the first time a user logs in and
> -                                removed on his final logout. If a user
> +                                removed on their final logout. If a user
>                                  logs in twice at the same time, both

Similar here.

Lennart

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Lennart Poettering, Red Hat